Kia ora Zac. Wow, I really like your word choices! They helped to create a picture in my mind! I can see you have tried using the new skills we have been learning in writing, and it shows in how you are adding details to each sentence. Well done.
Kia ora Zac, thank you for sharing your mahi (work) with us. I can see you have thought carefully about which words to use in your writing. These words had an enormous impact on me: "...giving a fiery end to the people below". It reminded my just how devastating a volcanic eruption can be. You can be proud of this work - ka pai Zac!
Kia ora Zac. Wow, I really like your word choices! They helped to create a picture in my mind! I can see you have tried using the new skills we have been learning in writing, and it shows in how you are adding details to each sentence. Well done.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Zac, thank you for sharing your mahi (work) with us. I can see you have thought carefully about which words to use in your writing. These words had an enormous impact on me: "...giving a fiery end to the people below". It reminded my just how devastating a volcanic eruption can be. You can be proud of this work - ka pai Zac!
ReplyDeleteI like the way you really think about the best words to use to make your writing more gripping and informative. Ka pai!
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